What do you think of this poem? i wrote it myself.?

Scared, alone and cold, get me out of this world, i dont know whats wrong with me, come please sing this song with me, i try to comply what ur saying to me, but its so hard, like trying to jog a couple thousand yards. all of a sudden im behind theses prison bars, nxt thing i got a new car, Damn maybe this time ill get kinda far, next thing i know im at a bar, drinking and slurring, then everythings all blurry, this world is all spinny and swirly, i make some bad choices, i start to listen to these voices maybe theyll lead me a good way, let me escape, now i can sleep at night, without liveing in fright, i think im getting rid of this night mare, let me check the fright meter, quick get me a liter of soda, not beer, down my face runs a tear, im changing my ways, getting rid of all those sad days Pleas lord i pray, lets forget this, all these sins, just blow it away, never again shall i relive those days